I really like the color palette you have going here and the composition is neat. On the right side of the cliff however the perspective seems funny like it is going at a wierd angle unless you were trying to go for some kind of fish lense effect and then in that case never mind. I really wish you had done something more with the pose of the old man. Right now it is really stiff, perhaps if he was hunched over more or something because right now it looks like you have an iron rod stuck up his spine.

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Amazing art works, skill, imagination and style.


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Wow.....just wow...

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WOW. Are those sunken ships of some kind? Well whatever they are, this whole scene is amazing. One of those pictures I want to run inside.

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the old man's facial and body expression is just fantastic... congratulations!

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cool
i like it
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Fantastic! Especially the old man!

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